Cocoa - A Rictameter
64
This article was written by ‘Susan Sproull ‘on Hubpages and is protected by 'Copyright'
Cocoa
I slowly slip
On a cold winter’s day
I inhale your sweet aroma
Forgetting about my cares and worries
I cannot get enough of you
You are my addiction
How I love you
Cocoa
vote upvote downshareprintflag
- Useful (5)
- Funny (1)
- Awesome (10)
- Beautiful (5)
- Interesting (2)
CommentsLoading...
I agree with momma..YUMMY! Such a good poem too...so creative you are! I think I will make some right now as it is cold and raining..I will make you a cup too...:)
Yummy is right! If I didn't drink all my hot cocoa I think I too will go and make one.
I will make one for you too Susan...Be right back! :)
Sipping a cup of hot cocoa and reading poetry by Sueswan, what a perfect way to spend a cold day.
Hi Momma Mia, Susan and Sunnie
Thank you ladies for joining me in my addiction.
I actually wrote this poem while I was drinking hot chocolate at Tim Horton's. Chocolate has three syllables so I used Cocoa. :-)
Hi MATS
You are much too kind.
Thank you for your generous commments. They added the whip cream to my cocoa. :-)
Cocoa... Hmm.. Nice Hub
Hi Capedium
Thank you so much for your kind comments and for dropping by. :-)
A Hub from you always has something beautiful to say..
Great poem loved it. Vote up and awesome, great lady.
What a warming piece of poetry
I'll join you in that hot chocolate Sue, I have one every evening in the winter months.
You know you can always use Poetic license and spell it choc'late. Lol
Hi Capedium
Thank you for you beautiful comments. They have brought a big smile to my face. :-D
Hi Joyce,
Thank you great lady. :-) Your comments have warmed me just like a hot cup of cocoa.
Hi Rosemay,
Thank you so much. I am delighted that you decided to join me in a cup of hot chocolate. :-)
Choc'late, you are very clever my friend. That never crossed my mind.
so cute.. love cocoa... my favorite.. of course I like anything chocolate..
Voted up
debbie
Hi Debbie,
Thanks! Great minds think alike. ;-)
I can't take the credit for choc'late, drbj put it in a comment poem for me. Lol
Wonderful wordplay.
nice rictameter makes me wish I was the cup of cocoa..LOL :)
Your wonderful words does it fot me too! Love that hot chocolate on a chilly day. Lovely rictameter.
My votes as always to you Sueswan.
Well done rictameter. Hot cocoa is one of my favorite treats!
Your talent shines even through the darkness of yummy chocolate...Now, I want some!
@Vinaya - Thank you for the wonderful comment.
@Frank - Thank you. Love your comment about wishing to be a cup of cocoa. lol
@Fennelseed - Thank you. Your wonderful comments does it for me.
@Gypsy48 - Thank you fellow hot cocoa lover.
@poetvix - Sending you my thanks and big cup of hot cocoa.
Lovely rictameter Sue, cocoa and winter - you can't have one without the other!
Voting up!
Hi Lesley,
Thank you for the vote up. I agree that with cocoa and winter, you can't have one without the other!
Best wishes :-)
It is so inviting! Hope all is well my friend. Nothing warms the heart and soul like it:)
Hi Sueswan! Wow, I didn't think cocoa could be so - sensual! Voted up, up and away!
Hi lyricwriter
You are right nothing warms the heart and soul like it except for your great comments.
Hope all is well with you too.
Take care
Hi Dexter!
Now you know how sensual cocoa can be.;-)
Thank you for the votes. So glad you dropped by.
Take care
Thanks for the idea now I just need to figure out how to make the cocoa so it dissolves oh btw thanks again for the comment on my hub am off to check out your other hubs ttfn
Hi ausis
Thank you. I am glad that you dropped by.
Have you tried mixing the cocoa with a little milk to make a paste before filling your mug with hot milk?
This was beautiful poem. As chocolate lover, I give my vote to you. Take care. Cheers...
Prasetio
Hi Prasetio
Thank you my friend and fellow chocolate lover. :-)
Take care. Cheers...
Susan
Brilliant Sue, I really loved this one.
Simple yet sophisticated.
Take care an dhave a wonderful weekend.
Eddy.
Hi Eddy
Thank you my friend.
Wishing you a wonderful weekend.
Sue
Hi again Sue thanks for the advice I know there must be a difference between 3 kilo cooking & 500 gram drinking cocoa my friend does herbs & spices & they talk about the mesh size. I am obviously getting the larger grind just like coffee that's why it is grainy compared to the pre made shop stuff.
I actually found a recipe here on HP used it & found it worked great http://hubpages.com/question/29224/star-bucks-sign
Thanks again
Hi ausis
The recipe sounds great. I will have to give it a try. I use Ghirardelli unsweetened cocoa.
Have a good day. :)
Now I need some cocoa! I loved this ode to the warming chocolate treat - the only thing I'm wondering is where are the marshmallows? :)
Voted up and awesome (because there is no "yummy" option for voting, sadly).
Hi Fastionista,
Thanks for your yummy comments. lol
I like marshmallows but not in hot chocolate. If I was serving you hot chocolate, I wouldn't forget the marshmallows. :-)
Your poem is excellent. I love cocoa too. What's not to love?
Lol! Thanks, Sue! :)
@James Thank you! You are right. What's not to love? :)
@Fastionista My pleasure :)
i need to experiment with rictameter but first, i need a glass of cocoa...
Hi Justin,
Enjoy your cocoa. I look forward to your first rictameter.:)
Momma Mia Level 4 Commenter 4 months ago
Yummy! Winters the right time for this addiction huh? Hope you are having a great evening and plenty of cocoa :)