Cupid - A Rictameter Poem
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Cupid
Shoot your arrows
Across the starry sky
Lovers await your arrival
As you fill their hearts with romance and love
Giving flowers and chocolates
Toasting this day of love
With sweet kisses
Cupid
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Hi Sue, Great poem. It tells it like it is supposed to be on that special day. Greg
Hi VIS
Thank you kindness fairy. Do you mind if I call you that? Your kind and generous comments have touched my heart.
Hi Greg
Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
May you have a Happy Valentine's day with your special lady.
another awesome poem Sue.. Love it..
voted way up
debbie
Hi Sue, I won't. She is in Calif. and I am in Colo. But, we will have our own special day. You will find that special someone with that smile and the love that you have as you show in your hubs. Greg
Lovely poem. Happy Valentine's day, Sue!
Sue,
I just posted my first Rectameter poem and was wondering if you'd mind if I link Cupid to it? I really like this one.
oops just realized I spelt that wrong ....Rictameter
Wonderful poem Sueswan, it's so beautifully written. I'll keep an eye out for cupid arrow to see who gets lucky close by. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce
@Debbie - I appreciate and thank you for your kind comments and vote up.
@Gregas - I hope that special day comes soon for you and your love. Your comments have not only put a smile on my face but in my heart. :)
@Mary - So glad you liked it. Happy Valentine's day to you and Baby!
@Susan - I read your first Rictameter and it is a winner. You did a wonderful job. I would be honoured if you linked cupid to it.
@Joyce - Your beautiful comments have left me feeling happy and hopeful. Thank you for the vote up.
I wish all of you a Happy Valentine's day.
Bless you
Sue
this was sweet like kisses :)
Hey! cupid.. Make me your first stop
Let this val. mark a new dawn..
Shower your flowers
Make every of our day a toast
Keep my watery lips watery
May me hunger for her lips
Make us sun and rain...
Like lighten and thunder
No one dares to take away your arrow..
Cupid..
Tell how she is a queen
And that she was first on your list
Hi Frank
Sending sweet thank yous your way. :)
Hi Capedium,
I hope cupid gets your message.
"Keep my watery lips watery
Make me hunger for her lips"
Very sensuous my friend.
Interesting.
Have you considered also writing a poem about the Sleeping Giant?
Happy Val. in advance.. Wishing you lots of love.
Hi Capedium
Wishing you lots of love too. Happy Valentine's Day. :)
Hi F
I have not considered writing a poem about the Sleeping Giant. Have you?
Thanks for dropping by.
Sueswan I give this poem another 4 paws up. You know I don't need to be hit with Cupid's arrow to make me love you, my two legged buddy. I'm sending you lots of big slobbery kisses. Happy Valentines day Sueswan!!!
Hi Four legged Buddy
You have made my Valentine's day with your sweet comments. My heart is smiling. Kisses back to you.
Happy Valentine's day my Four legged Buddy. :)
V.I.S. 3 months ago
Sueswan, Your talent amazes me. Cupid may shoot his arrow to fill hearts with love and romance but I think you must have been zapped by the talent fairy at a least a dozen times to be able to write poetry as well as you do.