My Mind is playing the Same Old Song
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Emotions tied in knots
I need to write
My feelings and thoughts
Leaving me feeling like a fool
I was the perfect victim for you
My mind is playing the same old song
Why did I trust you
So willing to play along
Believing your intentions were sincere
Your sweet words
Brought music to my ears
My mind is playing the same old song
Why did I trust you
So willing to play along
In my heart
I usually trust
I let you pull me
Into your game of lust
Writing note to self
So I will remember
Next time
Don’t fall
For the charms of a handsome stranger
My mind is playing the same old song
Why did I trust you
So willing to play along
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Hi Susan,
I am sure your tune is great. I actually don't have one for this song. :-)
Have a good weekend.
"Once burned, twice cautious." No need for the same old song. "Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me." Broken hearts have scar tissue, to make them stronger. "...older, wiser," you bet, and you better.
Hi persypcacious
No need for the same old song. If we only learned from our mistakes, the first time.
Great lyrics! I like it.
Hi Will
Thanks! Great to see you. :-)
Have a good weekend.
I must say, when I learnt that you just published a Hub.. I smiled.. When I read the Tittle, again!, I smiled. And I had just read the first two lines when I felt my heart beat.. I love love this Hub.. What can I say.. touching, beautiful,insightful, revealing, sweetest mistake, hurt but not depressed, beating but not defeated...
My heart is playing the same Old song..
I can tell you are not here to stay
But am willing to give it a try
Deep down it feels like a dream and I realize it soon will end.. But I was willing to take a chance with you.
My heart is playing the same Old song
And for cherished thought and that priceless moment
I was willing to Play along...
....no one does it quite like you - in the simple perfection and economy of well chosen words - love your new 'hot' profile picture by the way - lake erie time 3:27pm how are you coping with our Canadian winter these days?
Great lyrics Sue, I found myself singing this.
There are many lessons to learn around love and we don't always learn the first time do we.
Remeber that song , i dont remember who sang it ,'Love Hurts"? this reminded me of that song , very emotional and so true , yea, love sucks , thats why i have a fish , 2 dogs and a cat ...lol I voted up and up and away ! :) have a great day my friend !:)
Great song, liked it. Vote up and away, Joyce.
@Capedium Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. They put a big smile on my face. I love the words you added.
@Epi Thank you so much. Your words bring a happy song to my mind. Thanks for the compliments on my pic. Blushing.
@Rosemay Thank you. You are so right. We don't always learn the first time.
@Jami Thank you for the up up and away votes. Nazareth sang "Love Hurts" What would we do without google. My sister has a Border Collie. He is better company than some people I know.
@Writer So glad you liked it Joyce.
Wishing everybody a great weekend. :-)
Have a great weekend too..Beautiful Hub
this could be a great song.. You need to get faith Hill to sing. it.. great hub
dedbbie
Hi Debbie
Thank you. It would be an honor to have Faith Hill sing it.
Have a good evening. :-)
I can relate to these words, and that same old song, going around and around on the turntable that is my mind. Love your words here, my votes to you!! Oh, and I love your hot new profile shot too!! :)
Hi Fennelseed.
Glad you enjoyed this one.
Thanks for the votes and the compliment on my profile shot. I give credit to my sister who took the picture. :)
Enjoy your day. :)
"I let you pull me/Into your game of lust" - so true - why do we let that happen at the worst times?! I love the metaphor of the same old song - that's perfect to describe the patterns we fall into without meaning to or even wanting to. Another great one, Sue - Voted up and awesome!
Hi Fastionista
Thank you as always for your kind comments and votes up.
Maybe at the worse of times we are not thinking rationally so we get pulled into the game of lust.
Have a good day. :-)
yeah everything about it I lust I mean I loved phew..:) Frank
Hi Frank,
I love your humour. Thanks for your great comments. :-)
Hi Sue - Another good "bittersweet story" poem.
Haven't seen a Haiku in a while. Have I missed them or is the Haiku you on hiatus?
Hi Teresa,
Thanks, glad you liked his one.
You haven't missed any Haikus. I am just taking a break. :-)
Hey, Sue,
Girl, you nearly told the story of my life...falling for strangers, while mostly being driven by lust, and going on to break their hearts as a result.
And on a number of occasions, I was the one who ended up with the broken heart.
Hi feenix,
Lust sure can get us in trouble. I met a guy who said he found me attractive and wanted to get to know me better. He asked me if I would like to go out. I said yes,and he never did call. Maybe, I should have played hard to get but I am too old for games.
Have a good evening my friend. :)
Just Ask Susan Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago
I like as a song. I actually went and instead of reading it I sang it. Probably not with the same tune that you had in mind for it but....